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Submitted: October 21, 2012
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Hanging On A Treeby !Lillytehcat

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Critique by ~Firefox444 Nov 8, 2012, 4:23:12 PM

Cute design, but the tree doesn't really fit in with the way the cat is, if that makes any sense, and the clouds are white blurs that are outlined. and LEFT outlined. Don't mean to be rude, just saying what i see, but the tail is much too short, and some of the shading is more dark green than shadowy. Again, no offense intended, just telling you what i see to help you improve your art to the best it can be. Also, you forgot to color in the mouth, and the lack of nose is irritating, but that may just be me, some people think it's cute that way, it also is cute, when done properly, with a nose but no mouth. Hope I helped.

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Critique by =Wildphyre-Pyro Nov 4, 2012, 12:51:24 AM

I guess I'll critique how you did c:

Well, overall, the picture looks adorable >w>

But, it's a bit plain looking. try putting in more textures on the bark, or try making leaves. It really adds impact to the picture.

The clouds look a bit blurred. try making them look more defined.

The tree itself is a bit unrealistic. The tree looks a flat, and the branch is coming out at a sharp angle. And what about the leaves? leaves are difficult, yes, but they would make the picture look about 105% better, trust me.

The shading on the tree is nice, again, it could use more texture, but it looks okay. Work on WHERE you shade though. not just the edges of the tree should be shaded. The shading on the cat though, i think that could be darker, to match the tree. To be honest, i cant really even tell that its shaded. It looks flat, like a drawing with markers. Give it darker shading, and put it in the right spots, and there will be more dimension to it.

Your anatomy could use work, but then again, this is quite alright for a difficult pose.

Its so cute though gahh~ ;w;