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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Firstly, I love the texture you added to the background^w^ It shows the light and dark features of the car which shows it is close and coming toward Snowfur. I think there would need to be more tree's since it's close to a forest and keeping them closer together would show that. A suggestion would be to keep a few close and others far away to show that it's a forest as well<3 The posture is right except the one leg on Bluestar:3 I'd suggest to thin it out a bit. The one thing I love is the expressions<3 They are exactly how you'd draw them for this scene. For the pose of Snowfur I'd look at cat photo's for that^^ It really helps since I've done that as well:3 Overall I really like it:33 It is very good for Paint.
Sorry if I was a bit harsh;v; I don't mean to be<3333
Lets start with the background. The pros are I love how you shaded and highlighted it, and it is pretty good for MS Paint. Something I would suggest would maybe be adding some more trees? ;o; They're in a forest, so ideally, there would be more trees ;w;
Now onto the cats. Your anatomy is pretty good ;o; On Bluefur's hind legs though, the lines are a bit wonky, and on the one it tends to get thicker towards the bottom ;w; Also on Snowfur, there doesn't look like she's standing with her hind facing us, she sort of looks as if she's just.. I don't know.. there? xD Maybe try adding a line to define the curves in the back. It really helps a lot. Also maybe try to define the head and neck from the body a bit more on Snowfur ;o;
I'm really really sorry if I sound mean ;u; I really don't mean to TT^TT
Hope this helps! <33
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