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Snowfur's death by Lillytehcat Snowfur's death by Lillytehcat
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Snowfur's deathby Lillytehcat

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Animals©2012-2014 Lillytehcat
Snowfur death from warrior cat ^^.
Gah why?! Why Ms paint D: ? Why u no good to meh .A.?!?
I had to use "Ms paint" because my mom unplug my computer so I used my dad , and my dad only has 1 program "ms paint" .
Hope you like it ^^..

Snowfur , and bluestar : Erin hunter
Art : Me

Program : Ms paint
Time : 2 hours
Tool : Mouse
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Okay :D I don't do critiques often so please bare with me TT^TT

Lets start with the background. The pros are I love how you shaded and highlighted it, and it is pretty good for MS Paint. Something I would suggest would maybe be adding some more trees? ;o; They're in a forest, so ideally, there would be more trees ;w;

Now onto the cats. Your anatomy is pretty good ;o; On Bluefur's hind legs though, the lines are a bit wonky, and on the one it tends to get thicker towards the bottom ;w; Also on Snowfur, there doesn't look like she's standing with her hind facing us, she sort of looks as if she's just.. I don't know.. there? xD Maybe try adding a line to define the curves in the back. It really helps a lot. Also maybe try to define the head and neck from the body a bit more on Snowfur ;o;

I'm really really sorry if I sound mean ;u; I really don't mean to TT^TT
Hope this helps! <33
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Herrow;vv;

Firstly, I love the texture you added to the background^w^ It shows the light and dark features of the car which shows it is close and coming toward Snowfur. I think there would need to be more tree's since it's close to a forest and keeping them closer together would show that. A suggestion would be to keep a few close and others far away to show that it's a forest as well<3 The posture is right except the one leg on Bluestar:3 I'd suggest to thin it out a bit. The one thing I love is the expressions<3 They are exactly how you'd draw them for this scene. For the pose of Snowfur I'd look at cat photo's for that^^ It really helps since I've done that as well:3 Overall I really like it:33 It is very good for Paint.

Sorry if I was a bit harsh;v; I don't mean to be<3333
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WispTheKitty Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awesome, but why did Snowfur have to die chasing ShadowClan cats!?! and i just gave a spoiler alert to people who haven't read the book oopsy :3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Artist
XD lol How many books do you have of the Warriors? ( if u have em ) .W.
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WispTheKitty Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i have the first series, the new prophecy, and i read two super edition books: Bluestar's Prophecy, and Firestar's Quest X3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Artist
I have 4 books of Warriors and 2 comic books of them ;3
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WispTheKitty Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
aww lucky, im on book 5 of The New Prophecy series :3 im not going to give any spoilers this time!
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aniwablue Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Wah...! So tragic! Well done!
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Artist
Why thank u very much
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aniwablue Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome!
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XXmistXX Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
TEACH ME IN THE WAYS OF THE MS PAINT
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