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Will draw for Pointz by Lillytehcat Will draw for Pointz by Lillytehcat
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Will draw for Pointzby Lillytehcat

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Animals©2012-2014 Lillytehcat
Yep!
Decided to draw Lilly again xD
Anyway..
All comissions r 3 Points now Owo
accept ref r 20 points >w>

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I want to know how I did.. :icongrin--plz:
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Since you asked.. I'm gonna write my first critique evar ;w; (I'm gonna be fair)

-I would say you did a prettey good job. The paws look good, a nice style. The ears are just a triangle, it's a good shape but would look better with an extra line. The mane looks gel'd, I suggest you do a little-bit longer stripes of hair insted of one blob. (Looks cuter that way too) Nose is missing, but that's a good thing, gives the peice a fun look. The necklace around the neck and tail is awesome :D
-I don't think the eyes look good, the size is fine, the cat just looks a bit 'blind' since there is not white bit in them. I would add more sparkles to make it look better ^-^
-The colours fit perfectly, the backgound could be a bit less transparent thou.

-Overall the style is prettey un-original, many people draw this way. But it looks very cute, and you did this with a mouse which it prettey impressive.

-Over time you should try adapting this style to make it look more oiginal and simply better. Try adding more detail and shading C: And make the cat stand out infront of the backgound.
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nyu. no critique 4 u. >:3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Artist
;A;
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yush. >:3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Artist
critique :iconbegplz:
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nyu. >:3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Artist
;A; omg whyyyyyy
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Lightfeathy555 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just cuz. >:3
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Artist
QAQ plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz or i no do ur request
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smileydots Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dawww cute :)
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Lillytehcat Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Artist
Thank u~ Owo
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